Like dark, warm wet
Seeping into hairline
Fractures, she has
Infiltrated you and yours.
Winter heralds a sharp
Freeze and crack.
--
I'm a pressed together
Mosaic of contradictory spins and
Falls - each new-minted standpoint
Rolls to the rest and locks in.
posted by Emma @ 3:43 pm
2 Comments:
As I have said, I think your poetry is great. But I should mention that not only is it great, but it sometimes "works" for me more than other times. And the second piece here is one of those times when it works more than others... Can't explain why of course but that is the beauty of it, right?
I'm really glad that this one works - it is one of my favourites from the newer ones. And I'm especially glad that it works for you, Kepp.
And you're right, it doesn't need explaining, as long as it resonates with you, yes?
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